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Re: "But an old friend"
I think you did a really good job on this! I enjoyed the rhythm that you used since it portrayed a more angry tone to it which is exactly what ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: My Inspiration
Amazing, amazing, amazing. I really like this poem and honestly cannot think of any critiques. I loved your rhyming and I felt that all of the words just flowed perfectly ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: As if I Never Existed
Personally, I don't write poetry but I enjoy reading it. This poem was absolutely superb! I feel that you captured the emotion perfectly and really went into detail of the ...
Mar 10, 2011