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I definitely agree with the other reviewers. They pointed out multiple things that I would have brought up myself. I did feel that it lacked a bit emotion. Since this ...

All right. So since this is a longer piece than I'm used to reviewing, I'm going to split it into two reviews. I'll post the second review as soon as ...

Hiya! I'm Rachael! :) I like the idea of this story so far. It drew in my attention since this is the type of thing that I enjoy reading. I'm ...

I. Love. This. In the beginning, I thought that this was going to have a very sad ending and I was not looking forward to it. But, you managed to ...

First off, the nitpicks: But here it was, the town of Guana burned to the ground, and all of its inhabitants including my surrogate father, dead. All except me. I'm ...

Very well done. Your writing seems very effortless and has a nice pace to it that readers appreciate. I like the way you start this; it just grips the reader, ...

First off, the nitpicks: I would then tidy them away, pretending that the sentiments expressed within them didn’t mean anything to me. I love this sentence. It has a certain ...

First off, the nitpicks: Dear diary I must contact the Archangels, I have found evidence of a Fallen Angel. I hope and pray that it is not a completely immoral ...

You know, I really like this. It was different from things I'm used to reading, but I really enjoyed it! I instantly fell in love with your characters (especially your ...

First off, the nitpicks: "I'll be back?! What do you mean by that?! I don't understand!" h e cried "I meant that no matter how hard I try, I can't ...

I love this story! :) You should definitely stick with the narrative style since it's different, fits perfectly, and allows you to add a ton of witty and humorous lines. ...

Very nice! :) I loved your description here, as well as the conversations among the characters; they seemed very real. I adore your writing style; it has a sort of ...

Hi! :) I really like this story so far! I like the plot (from what I can see) and feel that it has great potential! However, I did find many ...

Hi! :) I'm so glad you asked me to review this! I love where you're going with this; I can't wait to read more. I love how developed your characters ...

Hi!:) I absolutely adore this! I'm very interested to see where you're going with it, so keep it coming! :) I just have a few nitpicks. When Reni blink the ...