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Hola! Rawrafied here, representing Royal Navy, to enjoy this lovely piece of work you've provided. Warning, I have not enjoyed you previous segments, so ignore anything that might have been ...

'Ello! Rawrafied here, representing team Royal Navy. I should warn that I haven't read any of your lovely, previous segments. Actually, they're not showing up on the side like they ...

Hiya. Rawrafied here to review your lovely segment. Warning, I have not read any of the previous ones, so ignore anything not applicable in relation to things previously addressed. The ...

'Ello! Rawrafied here, representing Royal Navy, to enjoy this lovely segment of your story. Warning, I haven't had the pleasure of perusing through any of the previous chapters, so ignore ...

I have realised that Dr. Greenway is not an arsehole... I feel like you're starting to slip more into past tense. Present tense is a difficult tense to write it, ...

Alright, let's kinda skip the intro and just dig in, shall we? :3 Liked that the sessions were separated by the last chapter and that you're numbering them via chapter ...

'Ello, back again. Once more, just going to treat this as a solo piece for the time being. Nice start to the chapter with some sarcasm. I actually think it's ...

Hola! Rawrafied here, representing team Royal Navy, to enjoy your lovely piece of work. :3 Warning, I have not read anything prior to this segment, so ignore any points I ...

Hiya, Rawrafied here to represent team Royal Navy. I'm gonna go line by line an pick out things that catch my eye. :3 I feel like your first sentence would ...

Rawrafied here, representing team Royal Navy. I'm going to go sentence by sentence and pick out anything that catches by eye, okay? :3 Loved the first sentence. Does a good ...

Hola! Rawrafied here to enjoy your story's lovely segment. I'm going to go line by line and pick out things that catch my eye, okay? :3 Nice first line. Simple, ...

Hello! Rawrfied here, representing Royal Navy. I'm going to dissect your lovely piece of work here, sentence by sentence, and pick out things that catch my eye, okay? :D Nice ...

'Ello! I'm gonna go line by line a pick out things that catch my eye, okay? :D Well, the first lines certainly caught my attention (blame the ovaries). xD He ...

'Ello, 'Ello~~ Rawrafied here to enjoy your lovely story. I'm a terrible person and have neglected to read your other chapters. So I'll try to comment on anything that may ...

'Ello! Rawrafied here to represent Royal Navy by enjoying this segment of your lovely story. Warning, I have not read any segment prior to this, so ignore anything that has ...