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Re: Fantasy
Well Haruno Sakura hit it pretty hard with the grammar, so I’m going to go more on content. But one little thing first, I believe you are suppose to have ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Hello, First poem!
In your first poem, here are my comments on lines: Over your body.
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Night - TSun
Hello, before I begin there is just something I have to get off my chest. I have a little pet-peeve about people not capitalizing the letter “I” and you seem ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Was it wrong to love you ? Preface
Hello there! Thought I would offer up some critique! Let’s start with word choice and grammar. An ordinary person Yes, Like the fact that Like I have told you already. ...
Jan 31, 2009