random.thoughts

Well Haruno Sakura hit it pretty hard with the grammar, so I’m going to go more on content. But one little thing first, I believe you are suppose to have ...

In your first poem, here are my comments on lines: Over your body.

Hello, before I begin there is just something I have to get off my chest. I have a little pet-peeve about people not capitalizing the letter “I” and you seem ...

Hello there! Thought I would offer up some critique! Let’s start with word choice and grammar. An ordinary person Yes, Like the fact that Like I have told you already. ...