rainsallthetime

Err....One question: What did Dan died from? Ghosts? Demons? What killed him? I get the idea that the letters will signal the death of a person. But what I didn't ...

This was awesome. Congrats on that! I was immediately hooked to the story once I read the first sentence. Slight grammar mistake here and there but hey, no one's perfect! ...

Three words. Need more description. The story has a good plot and theme that is quite interesting but I felt you were skipping some of the vital parts of the ...

The grammar problems are already corrected by the reviewers here. SO I will skip this part as I feel its not the grammar that makes the story but the characters ...

I think the story and the message you tried getting through was pretty clear. Lots of reviewers before me had already mentioned that. I understood the plot and the theme ...

I was really fascinated by the story. It was really original without trying hard to be so. I was hooked from the first line. Maybe you could add more paragraphs? ...

At first glance, i really really thought I'm reading a story where a girl had to say goodbye to her boyfriend or something like that. Romance. Love. The works. But ...

I liked your character really much. Wish you could add more details and the things he did in his life to OBVIOUSLY show that he really is a sociopath. If ...

In my opinion the 'drip' part was distracting and disrupts the flow of the story. Near the end when the 'drip' part stops, only then i could start reading with ...

I think that the story doesn't have a consistent flow. Its disjointed and sketchy at some parts. Although some here thinks its a great work, for me its not yet ...

Extremely touching story...I almost cried reading this work of yourself. Wonderfully written and skillfully phrased. The writing style suited the mood so well that I'm already hooked with the first ...

Wonderful story. The MC seemed real and not just a story character. Old ideas like war and modernization suited the mood and setting of the story. I felt a bit ...

Short but full of stuff. Just like what Stephen King used to say: simple but fun gets the job done...Anyway, you should try writing more and expanding it into a ...

Wonderful written. At first i thought she was in a dream you know. The way you wrote it made me felt that way. You also flawlessly written the part where ...

Powerful, emotional, touching. The ingredients of a good story. No dialogues but the message was clear and sharp. Almost zero clutter and every part of the story is important to ...