raevynstar

It's should be its. Don't worry; apostrophe use get's everyone sometime's. ;) I think this poem is hilarious, even though I don't know much about comic sans (or fonts in ...

This is good so far. A little heavy on adverbs and adjectives, but that's not always bad. I'm honestly excited to read more of this. One thing, in the lines ...

I'm getting used to the writing style. In fact, I actually like it now that I've read a little more. :) As for the plot, it's good enough that I'll ...

Well, I did like this. I mean, it's confusing, but at the same time, maybe that's good. Maybe not all writing has to be clear-cut. (And maybe I'm just not ...

:/ I see a story with the same title and a similar description. Just to be cautious, I'd better point it out.

I really like this! The writing style seemed a little 'off' in parts, but then I forgot about that because it's mostly great. I think this could come right before ...