raesvaughn

This is really cute! I love lgbt stories and writings, and the Troye Sivan line reminded me of my time in middle school when I was just figuring what kind ...

Wow this really hit me! The emotions are very raw and real, but also very relatable. Many people I know spent years of their life dedicated to a sport (or ...

This is a truly underrated work. Your diction and word choice are spot on, and I love how Seraphina is portrayed. I'm interested to find out more about her character ...

I totally was not expecting that ending! This story seems pretty genuine and evokes a lot of emotion. I would say to work on your grammar, use of commas, and ...

I have yet to read your other chapters, but this piece is so good that I definitely will! Your use of imagery and writing style are just gorgeous. It's fluid, ...

I just read the first chapter, and after reading this I think this could be a really interesting story. It's engaging and realistic, brutal on a conceptual level. I believe ...