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No problem! I actually had so much fun reviewing this because I didn't know what the structure was, and I think you did a really great job with it :D

Np! :D

Thank you for your review! Every time I see a sunset I'm reminded of other sunsets, which was why I used "infinity of moments" :D

Thank you! :D

I tried hard to become light Light – I do not simply mean light weighted I mean a wanted to become ignited I wanted to become something Which could burn ...

You're welcome! The literal translation makes a lot more sense :D

You're welcome! I realize sometimes I'm super grammar/nitpick-heavy in other reviews and I wanted to try a new style (:

Thank you so much for your review! I just came up with this story last night so I'm still figuring out the questions you're asking (:

I did make this first chapter a little confusing on purpose because the main character is also confused, but the man in the sedan calls the main character "Bunny" because ...

Haha xD I totally understand! I never have the stamina to keep writing after four pages, but if you do decide to turn this into a novel I would definitely ...

I get it now! I'm not sure why I latched on to Vye in the beginning, but thanks for redirecting me :) I think I was reading this more as ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D

That makes sense! I figured you meant the mayor %uD83D%uDE04

Sometimes hitting shift enter helps lessen line breaks; you could also us these things "~" to put breaks in between stanzas.

And others Instead of staying inside in the storm They go out to dance I love this part! Your imagery is very quiet and soothing, and I love how you ...