Young Writers Society

Hello again! I'm afraid I don't have much grammar input for this chapter; you've done a great job! Here's the few things I picked up: For ages he saw a ...

heya! I just want to leave a quick suggestion. I don't know if the prompt was just "the value of community service" or "what is the value of community service ...

Hi Shamiaya! Welcome to YWS! Your poem takes a neat twist on "Love"; instead of showing us how love feels, for the most part you give advice on how to ...

Hello Pokeberry! (I love your avatar btw) The first thing I usually do when I decide to review a novel/chapter is check how long it is, and wow... you have ...

Wow. I've been following your poetry because it's very vivid and beautifully written, but this work stands out to me so much for its content and its heartfelt feeling. In ...

Hi Mailice! (sorry this review was long in coming--school's kept me busy ;)) And the next morning a monstrous spectacle awaited the world - she got up early. Oh, the ...

I love your beginning, it’s a very simple yet inviting, and I would even say poetic :D It fitted wonderful ly into the house. Wonderful is modifying “fitted”(verb), so it ...

Hi Yoshikrab! I'm mostly here for your theme(I want to get it right this time!) but there is just one thing that bothers me: they're just as pretty as bright ...

Hi Mailice! "How does he want to come? And why? It's not just because of you, is it?" "How" is kind of a weird question to ask, because to me ...

Hello! I'm back at it with grammar suggestions! :) They were possibly looking for the two, but they made it to bridge undetected. If they perceived horse whinnies, Martha spoke ...

Hi Lavvie! I'm here to repay the gift of a review :) two glimmer: iridescence cocooning between a pooling oasis on cumulus sheets There’s so many lovely words!! I took ...

Hi Yoshikrab! I love sonnets, and can't wait to dive into this one! My favorite line is by far your fourth: our tears leak from our fingers to the floor ...

Hi Mailice! This time I'll forego focusing on grammar, because for the most part you have it all under control. Here's a couple of general impressions I got on my ...

I'm really impressed by your story! My first read through was a little confusing, mostly because I wasn't sure who was thinking what, but I was really surprised by the ...

Hi Mailice! I'm back again for another review! The footpaths were a natural estate for Regenschloss. I'm not sure you used "estate" in the right context here. It seems right, ...