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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Can you show me your face, Cry?

    If you want something to show up like this, the code to do so is [ spoiler ] your text [ / spoiler ] but without the spaces. Since your ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: I've learned to hide my necklaces under my shirt

    I was wondering, what exactly are your necklaces? I can relate to your piece pretty well, on a metaphorical and more literal sense. For awhile, I had a necklace that ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Place or Yours? [Part 2]

    Thank you for the review ^-^ And indeed, the last paragraph was a formatting error that I was too lazy to go back and fix xD

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Politics Re: f*ggot

    Tagging everyone who replied here. I made a comment about my inspiration for the poem, and I tried to tag everyone there but I don't believe it worked. @Eferhilda, @Lylas, ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Politics Re: f*ggot

    Gosh, thank you all for the praise ^~^ I'm so glad to see that everyone likes it! This was a sort of test run for the style I wrote it ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Azazel: Prologue

    Thank you! ^~^ This actually takes place several years before anything else in the novel. It's background information that I wanted the reader to have before beginning the rest of ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Could there be an us?

    Most of the reviews on this site are brutally honest, and I think that's probably because they're done by other writers. All writers want to improve, so when a writer ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Being a Boy is More Important than Breathing

    Thanks for the review ^~^ My intention was actually to turn this into a longer piece, and it initially was part of one but I couldn't decide where to go ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Edited to show the proper format ^^

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Hello ^^ Thank you for the review! The lack of capitalization and punctuation was intentional; I almost never write poetry that uses either. If I include capitalization or punctuation, it's ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Thank you! ^^ The "missing"/"missing out" makes a little more sense in the original version, which has formatting. I'm going to try to add it to this version too, so ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    Actually, it wasn't very developed :P Ten minutes before Review Day started, two other people and I decided to see if we could finish and upload poems before Review Day ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: tick tick tick

    I was rushed posting this and didn't bother formatting it correctly. If you'd like to see the correct formatting, you can see the original here:

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: prologue

    Wait, is this an epilogue or a prologue?

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Azazel: Prologue

    Thank you so much! ^^ I'm definitely planning on changing the description of Anne, but I need to figure out what I want to change it to. I didn't actually ...

    May 8, 2014


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