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Even after reading this, I truly do not understand why you believe homosexuality to be wrong. I do understand the fact that you believe it to be a sin, but ...

Pst, poetry is actually anything that isn't prose~ Pretty much anything can be a poem. It can be one line or a thousand, rhyme or not rhyme, tell a story ...

Wait, I just realized that wasn't the wording I used >.>

Wait, I just realized that wasn't the wording I used >.>

Become was actually referring to other people regarding someone as an it, or subhuman. However, I wrote it extremely vague and I need to work on adding some clarity to ...

Magpie is exactly right ^^ This poem is meant to allude to the "it" as being a non-binary person being called an it, but as you said, that was pretty ...

I just finished editing it a bit, so hopefully I've worked out some of the major issues~

From the characterization I have for Christian and Jules, I think it would've gone a little slower; still decently fast, but not /that/ fast. I was mostly just kind of ...

Thank you for the review ^-^ It was actually really helpful~ I knew I wanted to change something about the description, but I wasn't quite sure /what/ I wanted to ...

This is a rather random comment, but there's some agency or something that requires children to be 13 or older before they're allowed to register for most websites. If a ...

It could understand if it was in first person... or if Jules didn't say "gay sex" multiple times xP

I'm a little bit unsure how the whole gay was confusing, haha. Eh, that's okay.

Why "oh"?

Thank you! And yeah, Christian and Jules are both men. Jules is completely gay, but this is the first time that Christian has been with a guy~

It's not supposed to do that, though. Here's the post about the malware that causes it: