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You have a pretty good beginning to a novel here, but there are a few things I would recommend changing. First and foremost, there's just too much talking. Seraphine spends ...

Like Starleene said, I really love how simple this poem is. It's short with no punctuation and no frills, and in this case, that's a good thing. It wouldn't have ...

This is amazing, oh my gosh. The only way I can really describe how I feel about this would be with a keyslam or something. Your writing is absolutely fantastic. ...

I have to say, I'm a closet fan of zombie apocalypse stories, and so far I really enjoy yours! You've written your characters very realistically, and when they talk, they ...

This is a really meaningful poem, and I really like it. I love the message, and I love the writing. I strongly agree with you when it comes to the ...

Ahh, I love six word stories, and yours is fantastic! I think I have a good idea of the meaning behind it, but I'm not 100% sure. I can tell ...

I think you have a very good start to a story (novel?) here! I like your use of present tense (I'm a fan of present tense), and I like your ...

As a person with pretty severe mental illness, this almost made me tear up. This is a very special poem, and I guarantee it would be so meaningful to anyone ...

I think this is my favorite story I've read on here so far! I love your writing style, and I love your story. Your writing is so eloquent, and everything ...

I really love the universe you've created here, and the plot you have to go along with it (though you weren't super specific about the plot of the story). The ...

I really like this poem. I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but I really like how it's almost rambling--like someone who didn't sleep would do. The lack ...

I like your story and your concept. The premise is really interesting, and I like your characters, but they coupd use a little tweaking to make them more realistic. Your ...

Mike your essay, and I like the points you make. However, I think you could be clearer on your points, you could elaborate on them a bit more, and you ...

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Mike your essay, and I like the points you make. However, I think you could be clearer on your points, you could elaborate on them a bit more, and you ...

short, but it didn't need to be loando be good; I actually think it's the perfect length, because it's short and concise and if it had been much longer it ...