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Finally here on chapter four :D This was actually the chapter I read first, but it caught my attention so much I went and reviewed the first three chapters before ...

Here for chapter three! I think my favorite things about this chapter were reading about Cadogan's father, the description of the library, and learning about how magic and wizards work ...

Back for another review, and I think I liked this chapter even better than the first :D We get the background that was alluded to in the first chapter, and ...

Hey, here for a review! I absolutely love this piece. I love the writing, the characters, the dialogue, and especially the description. It's all phenomenal, and as I was reading ...

Hey, Seb here for a review day review! I absolutely love your writing, and while I was reading this piece there really wasn't a single thing that stood out to ...

Hey, Seb here for a review, and happy review day if you're participating! I really love your piece, here :D I liked the bits of dialogue you had, and you ...

Hey, Seb here for review day! I haven't read your other nine segments, but I'll try to do my best reviewing anyways! :) I think your biggest problem is that ...

Hey, Seb here for a review! Regretfully, I haven't read your other chapters, but I'll do my best to review anyways! I'll focus mostly on grammar, word choice, and other ...

Hey, here for a review! Like rawrafied, I regretfully haven't read your previous chapters :/ But I'll make sure I will in the future, because I really enjoyed this segment. ...

Hey, here for a review! I haven't read your other chapters yet (but I'll be sure to soon!) so I'm mostly going to focus on word choice and grammar and ...

Hey, here for a review! I liked your piece! I liked the short lines and the imagery you created, but a lot of it was really confusing. It's kind of ...

Hi, here for a review! Your story has a good idea behind it, and I love the imagery that you created. However, there were also some things I didn't like ...

From what you told me about this story, and from reading this, I'm really excited to see where you take this novel! This was a great scene to pick as ...

My favorite thing about this poem is the repetition. I love repetition, and I love how you used it here. It added a feeling to the poem that would not ...

I like the points you made in your essay, but overall it was very hard to read and understand. The first problem was the formatting: your paragraphs are all indented ...