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I think this is quite funny, although a little vague but I did find a few errors, mainly grammatical because I can not pick on anything but grammar... anyway, in ...

This is funny enough to be read and good enough to keep reading. If Edward Cullen was real, I'm sure he'd appreciate the break you just gave him. Nikki is ...

Ahh, if only all stories were this good. I loved the description, the sense of anitcipation, the content. I like how the emotions reflect themselves and the flow of this ...

i love the style you've used and i can see why you love it, it's just so... nice i feel enlightened and i thoght the only way you couild ever ...

Behold, I quote a spelling error - and it ain't because of Australian spelling. Noah seemed almost sceptical *. But now they were ‘The Lover’ and ‘The Beset Friend’** *this, ...

This is great, the portrayal of the characters looks so genuine and the mystery is absolutely intriguing. You may want to cut down on the said bookisms (e.g., "growled"), because ...

This is so deep.... but I love the language, and also how you didn't personalize the narrator by giving him a name. I love how it wrenches your soul and ...

This is such a great poem! There are some really great metaphors in here. It's so symbolic and the words are just - indescribably fitting. It's like there's a poem ...