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:3 yey!

ok I added a small flashback of their pre-teen years (since their in their teens here like 13, 14, or 15 years old)

thx :3 and watching the movie about... *counts on fingers and toes how many times I watched the move* XD what I mean is watching the movie so many times ...

kk thx :3

ok I don't have time for a review (sorry x.x) but I have 1 nitpick to point out real fast. "No! Help us more! Please! I need you!" Bluejay cried. ...

XD

thx :D and the next chapter is pretty short (sorry got writers block) and needs more description, so I might wanna fix that first ;)

lol :3

thx and like I told Wolfie, im gonna fix the detail stuff :P

thx! and I didn't know what else to write which is why the chapter is so short x.x I will do better discriptions and I will let u know when ...

ok :D

btw love ur new avie ^-^ and sorry 'bout Skype last night I got busy and my mom said I had to finish some random hoopla -_-

@CesareBorgia that wasn't the only mistake. I found a one that everyone missed.

ok I made it fan fiction so I wont get arrested (even though im too young to XD)

omg I didn't know it would be copyright x.x thx for telling me, and it was only like the movie for this first chapter. as I go on, I will ...