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Re: Fairytale. A love story... (Chapter One)
Hey Iheartbooks! I'll review your story today. So,to be honest, this is very, very cliche, it's the mysterious guy who meets plain girl and saves her from her plain and ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Melvin Harvey does the unexpected
Hey Ski!! I'll review your story today. Well, first of all it was nice to read since it was different, I expected something else but it was, as the title ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Little Blue Veins
Hey Bittersweet!! I'll review your story today. Well, first of all I have to tell you that this is a really beautiful story, inspiring and beautifully written. I liked your ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: betrayed
Hey Gee!! Well, this is a really good story, it has potential and if you develop it more I'm sure it will be a great story to read. For now ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Where The Music Is
Hey KAH!! I'll review your story today! Well, first of all, this is a really nice story, very emotional. I liked it a was really nice how you portrayed your ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: lullaby
Hey Kat!! Well, nice start, the poem was beautiful, how you described everything was beautiful, you rhythm was really good. Your wording was beautiful too. Ok so for the theme, ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Close, But No Cigar
Hey!! So, I liked your story, your character especially it gives a special touch to the story. There was lots of dialogue which is good especially because you knew how ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: I Watched Disturbing Cruelty
Hey Pandora!! So since I guess this was one of the first things you wrote I'll be honest, really honest. First of all you mentioned that the story had to ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Don't Cry, Amy
Hey Ofir!! Well, this was nice, I liked the story, the topic is very interesting. But there are some things that could be changed in order to make the story ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Rabbit
Hey Ski!! I'll review your story today! To be honest it was quite disturbing.lol.(In a good way, if there's even a good way to it) So the story is interesting, ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Underneath The Beech Trees
Hey there!! I'm Pudin and I'll review your piece today. Well, first of all I have to say that it's a really cute story,and I really, really liked your wording ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Excuses - Part One
Hello Temptation!! Interesting name by the way.lol. So I'll review your piece today, I'm a little rusty on this so please forgive me if I get anything wrong. So let's ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: YWS Classroom
*Cries* :( Why am I not in there? You forgot about me! :( *cries more* Nah, just kidding, nice story, loved it.
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: A Wicked Valentine
Hey Sionarama! I'll review your poem today! So this is really nice, quite original for a Valentine's day and quite creepy too. I'm a little rusty in poetry since I ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: As You Like It (Title subject to change)
Hey Winter! I'll review this today! Well, first of all, I loved it! I really did! It was very realistic. I liked your prologue a lot. Most of the time, ...
Feb 3, 2010
