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Re: My Soul To Keep Prologue
This was quite interesting. The Imagery was excellent and very appealing. A few pointers though, is that the transition to when he starts to talk about the queen's oldest son. ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Freshly Fallen: Ch.1 'His Wish'
Wow, this was amazing. The characters were sureal and thoughtful. It was vivid and fairly detailed. A suggestion i would make though is to thoroughly spellcheck/proofread your work. If you ...
Apr 22, 2011
