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Re: The Last Calculator
Yes, there were some grammar and spelling mistakes, but I thought that they weren't very distracting. The only problem that I have with it is that, through the dialogue, I ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Speech Marks
To me this is a new concept that I haven't heard before, and I have to say I liked it. I personally think the story could have been clearer. I ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: A Sojourn Through the Conscience
This story is absolutely striking and very very thought provoking. The idea of making these journal entries is an interesting choice. If I stumbled across a journal with these entries ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: At the End of the Road
The ending was a bit obvious, but I have no problem with that. The only thing that I do have a problem with though is that very last line, "It's ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Anxiety Attack (breathe in, breathe out)
A poem about anxiety attacks. I can relate so much. I have found that people who don't have to deal with anxiety have a very tough time understanding the struggle, ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: aishite
I really enjoyed it, and it definitely caught/kept my attention. I thought that until she murdered her crush, she was a pretty relatable character. Personally I thought the murder came ...
Feb 3, 2018
