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potter4life

potter4life

  • Art » General, Literature Re: my paintbrush

    This poem is really true!The artist disappointment and also success,i find that it really dipicts the life of an is also quite funny at the same time.Like how you said ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ^0

    I find this poem really funny like the hair part and the last paragraph where you went like Maybe That’s Where All My Hair Went Oh well. Its like a ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Fear of Vulnerability

    This is a nice poem!It is long and good and i really liked the middle part:]You can try to make it rhyme to make it better i guess-

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: excuses, excuses

    i never get how poems work lol but this is kinda nice:]

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: roy g. biv

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    It is a mix of emotions:] Kinda dark at times... But i liked the ending:]

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: roy g. biv

    It is a mix of emotions:] Kinda dark at times... But i liked the ending:]

    May 11, 2020


If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
— Emily Dickinson