polkadotph

I really like the story, and it is very well written in my eyes, and also others as you can see. you have a talent of writing and I'm jelly ...

I have to say, I do have to agree with david on the wierd part. At the least, kinda boring. The begining was all eh for me. There was no ...

You have a good start on this, and it is quite interesting. Yet theres too much diologue and not so much detailed descriptions in there. So try to make it ...

I have to say, I really loved your writing and the suspense that didn't falter the least bit. From my viewpoint, the begining did get me hooked and made me ...