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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tyger

    Tyger I stalk quietly through the undergrowth, blending perfectly with the moist vegetation. My sensitive nose is twitching with scents, all the animals I hunt. Both predator and prey. I’m ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blind

    A black rose has lost its first petal, falling into the dark, restless night. Withering slowly but surely, it begins its descent, to the fields of despair. The fields of ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Boulevard of Broken Dreams

    Hmm. I'm not one to criticizes, but I was actually kind of bothered by this poem. First of all, the name. You may have wanted to choose something.. more your ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Weight

    I was very interested by this poem. I have a very strong fear of the ocean, so the metaphor and imagery really got to me. I really relate to this ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Hermit, the Fairy, and the Coon

    I absolutely loved the first sentence, it captured me inside your story. Regardless of any ridiculous grammar mistakes, the ones that nobody cares to learn anyway, I thought it was ...

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suicidal Moon

    I'm not going to lie, when I clicked this poem I expected something much different. But this poem is actually incredibly good. I'm not too into the whole "suicide" or ...

    Dec 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For His Life

    All of you have it wrong. Believe me, I'm a very grammatical person, but don't you think all of these restrictions on "how you're supposed to write" is taking away ...

    Dec 3, 2010


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain