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Ah, alright. Thank you very much for your input and feedback.

In my opinion, dead words "bad, happy, sad etc" are quite dull so you should add some more meaningful and complex words to make it sound a bit better. That's ...

Hello! Okay well this poem is SO BEAUTIFUL. I'm genuinely envious haha. Blue is my favorite color and it's because it reminds me of drowning in love and pulled all ...

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Hello! This poem has potential however, some parts are cliche and are a little bit confusing. For example, "the rain falls when God sheds his tears for you". The rainfall ...

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Hello! (I am new to YWS so my review may be a little bland and unhelpful.. Sorry!) First off, I really loved the theme and idea, it seemed very original ...

Yeah , I was rushing it a bit because there was a four page limit but I'll try my hardest to fit it through and make it go slower. Thank ...

Thank you so much :D

hello! (sorry if my review is bland or not helpful. Im new to YWS so tell me if there is anything I can improve on!) First off, i really admire ...

thank you :)

Yeah, I haven't been writing poetry for a while and I'm young so i have a lot to work on... thanks for the review

Thank you, this really helped

Yeah, thank you for the review

very interesting. I expected something related to a depressed teen whining about how society mistreats teenagers. I enjoyed this because teenagers themselves are apart of society and not many people ...

i usually hate cliches and this story os cliche but i enjoyd it

i really enjoyed the ending, it was very satisfying. Stanza three is quite beautiful as well, I am a very lonely person and my heart connected with the lines.