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Re: Letter to a dead girl
This is just. Amazing. When I started reading this I assumed that the letter was to a childhood friend and the twist caught me by surprise in a good way. ...
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Re: Lonely Love
This is a really interesting story so far, it has a lot of potential. However, there are some problems. The main problem is the spelling and grammar, but the easiest ...
Apr 7, 2017 -
Re: was he awake?
I really like this! It's a pretty interesting concept, and I like the main character's inner monologue, however, there are some problems. First of all, the use of semicolons. You ...
Apr 7, 2017
