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Re: Amazing Grace
Not much on the relationship of Mark and Sarah. Is it just there? Like, is it just supposed to be the backround of the story, or does it show more ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Dare to Die - the sequel to Never succumb...
It was so detailed, so descriptive! The husband was a real arse hole, in my opinion, which really added to the story. Unless your keyboard is broken, like mine, I ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Dylan, I Hardly Knew Ya
This story is so detailed, and has a good voice from the main character. It did have some grammar errors, but they can be easily fixed. I liked how you ...
May 14, 2011
