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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Faking Perfect

    Hi friend! You already know how my reviews work, so here I go. I could be grammar picky but I don't think I will though, so that's a new thing. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Ghostmaster

    Hi there, Tiger! I'm pinkangel here to review for you. Red is for corrections, purple is for comments on the corrections, and blue is for general comments. I watched Mortimer ...

    Nov 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [2]

    Here I am again, Pink. I'm hoping that my reviews are helpful and not just repeating what the other reviewers wrote. That said, I'll get on to the review. I'm ...

    Aug 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Hey there, Pink. I'm here to review for you. By the way, I'm sorry for the late review, but I hope that it's good enough to make up for its ...

    Aug 23, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lux Aeterna

    Hey there, Sporky. I just have to say that I adore your avvie. Mr. Darcy's amazing. Anyways, on to the review. Fifty years. Fifty years of her life. Gone. Good ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 2, draft)

    I'm back, Romy. I hope you don't mind me calling you that by the way. Oh another thing, you can call me Danie if you would like. On to the ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 1, draft)

    Hey there, Romy. I'll be your reviewer for today. So red is for corrections, purple is for comments on corrections, and blue is for general comments. Dexter ran down the ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Surgeon's Child-1

    Hey there, Q! I'm here to review for you. So corrections will be in red , comments on the corrections will be in purple , and general comments will be ...

    Aug 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Seven ~ Part Two)

    Hey there Skinny! I'm here to review like you asked. That night was when the nightmares began. This seems a bit wordier than necessary. I think the line would make ...

    Jul 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Artist and the Philosopher

    So this won't be like any of my normal reviews where I go line by line, but this story seems pretty well off in the grammar department. I really don't ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Seven ~ Part One)

    Hey there, Skinny! (Can I call you that? I hope so. :shock: ) I'm here to review like you asked. I read all the other parts, so I'll be able ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Say That You Love Me

    Hey there, pudin! I'm here to review like you asked. All of my comments and corrections will be in pink. She stared across the room, grabbing her cigar between her ...

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 2

    Hey there Wario! I felt bad about the delay in getting the last one done, so I decided to do this one too. The teacher, Ms. Goa, really got on ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 1

    Hey there Wario! I'm here to review like you asked. There was once a boy who was different from any other. He was conceived to be a miracle, to be ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~

    Hey there jaz! I just had to review this because it reminded me of the Green Day song Last of the American Girls, which I just happen to be listening ...

    Jun 23, 2010


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