phoenixwriter

Thanks for the feedback! I shall change it ASAP (except I started a new draft for the entire novel...but....I will make sure to take your wonderful advice into account so ...

Wow! I love this poem since it feels like a letter, yet isn't quite one, and is simple, beautiful poetry. Keep it up! Love it, by the way!

Wow! So beautiful and heartfelt. I totally agree with the other comments. Keep writing! This poem is like an entire artwork by itself.

Thank you so much for your praise! I haven't heard much for a long time... and it really means a lot to me that you enjoy it. Please let me ...

Thank you, everyone for your comments! I wrote this when I was in tears over my friend's latest hurtful behavior. As you can see, I put a lot of emotion ...

Thanks, Sophia! The advice I will follow ASAP! Thanks for the review! Phoenixwriter

Thanks, Narnia! Btw, I LOVE Narnia too! It's an awesome! But, to the point... I really appreciate the support. Phoenixwriter

Hi, McMourning! Thanks for the review! I will follow your advice. Let me know if you want a particular work of yours reviewed!

Thanks for your review! Again, let me know if you want me to review your stuff too. I will keep you advice in mind! Thanks again!

Like your profile picture, first of all. Snape kept freaking me out by turning every second to look at me, but it's pretty cool! Thanks for your review. I will ...

Thanks for reviewing! Let me know if you want me to review your stuff! I'd love to :)

Thanks for your help. You covered a lot of points no one else had gotten to. I like your ideas, and I appreciate your advice! It means a lot to ...

Very realistic, just like a newspaper thing. One thing. Can you connect how the beat-up girl relates to the little boy, Carson? That transition is a little foggy. Clear that ...

Thanks for your helpful review! I'll try to do the same on your Chapter 1 Lymuria. I really appreciate it, and I'll change my story to fit your advice.

Hi, Thanks for the review, but when you tell me to write more, do you want me to be more descriptive or to continue writing? A few pointers would be ...