phantomwriterjoe

I like this poem. It is simple and direct. You are basically saying that you are the start of change, and everything to follow is the result of that first ...

Wow I love this. For me, you were sitting on your porch or in the park when you wrote this, it was raining, and you found a way to express ...

Wow that was very interesting. Easy to read, and dramatic; I feel like that could have been an excerpt from a best-selling, teen novel, like "The Mortal Instruments", or something. ...

An interesting story, though I confused exactly what it is about or what gave you the idea to write it? I enjoy the way it is written, and I like ...

I like the idea of being able to see one's soul. I am confused, however, if this is just a random idea you thought of, or if it is an ...

I like this poem because it is about a longing for times past, when legends existed. My favorite part is when you speak about your "love" in the first and ...