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Thank you so much! I really appreciate the compliments and the great advice...I knew I did something....

Thank you, SciFiGirl. That actually really helped and I think I fixed it.

Yes, if you want to not be able to put down a book, Ted Dekker is your man. You should read Skin. It really makes you think. The Cirlce Trilogy ...

wow, thank you!

Thank you both so much for your reviews and encouragement. And I fully agree, Mars. Typos definatly have that suckage factor. Again, thank you so much! ~ Risa

thanks and I'll get right on that ending and clarifications and stuff.

Thanks for the Crits. everybody!

I love this. It proves my point that inanimate objects have feelings too! Seriously, change the title. This deserves a much better title...or a title at all.

Wow! Thanks, everyone, for the critiques! I'll get working on that ending. :) -- Risa

Good job, Kairii. Defenitly emo rock. I like the way it flows and the wording really well. You can tell what the song is portraying. I really like this and ...

Yay! I love the point you make because tis true...tis..tis...tis...uh...tis

I feel repetitive when I write this but... the first stanza was repetitive. I liked the poem and the idea of the poem! Keep writing, risa

okey dokey...(did I spell those right?) Now I'm less confused. WAY less confused. Thanks. :D Risa

You really shouldn't copy from Twilght. You have the skills, but the originality isn't there, Risa

I loved it! I was hooked. Your characters: I got Agatha's attitude, but i don't know what to think of Kel. Keep writing, Risa