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I like it. Love triangles? Those sure do grab my attention. But I guess the fact you didn't develop that idea sort of disappointed me. Oh well... I think by ...

I've read all the other comments and have found a pattern amongst them. They don't understand! I do understand the story yet I do agree with Snoink who said there ...

The last sentence was... nice. :) I'm such a Hunger Games geek :"But there are worse games to play." I like it. I hated hated hated hated (and still hate) ...

Hey! Don't know if you remember this.. or if you even go on YWS anymore, but you asked me to read this... and I did! A dream at the beginning ...

Ooh! Scary! Nice job. Since some other people pointed out some small errors, I'm just going to focus on how I liked it. When I first started reading, I didn't ...

My head fell back into place with his heads tightly around me. I am gonna guess that you mean "hands", not "heads"... So uh, a pretty good story you have ...

I hope this review helps! I liked your story, but there were some grammatical and spelling errors! I also noted about the wording of the sentence, so, again, I hope ...

I tried to run but the arrow was faster than me and then I fall to the ground. Something pointy was on my back; I turned around and saw the ...

I liked the element of mystery in this story, but, I would like to know a little bit more, such as the setting and what gift/curse they have. Please describe ...

Since a lot of the other comments have grammar errors pointed out, I would just like to tell you about how I like this story. I liked the way you ...

A very touching story. I would feel the same way. Try to be strong and you never know, maybe, it won't be so bad! Try to stay confident, secure, and ...

A light flashed and tires squealed. Those were the last things I thought I would ever see/hear when I my car went spinning off the highway and into the ocean. ...

I only read the first half of the story, but, so far, it's really good. The Harry Potter terminology kind of confused me (I haven't even read any... I'm ashamed ...

i couldn't stop! it was very interesting! but, the title seems a little, well, unfitting.. it clearly tells you that it is a story about lion people, but, not very ...

I was a little bit confused at the beginning, but I finally realized that "Melanie" is Jemima. Good writing. Really good plot! :elephant: :mrgreen: :smt003 :D :) :o :smt001 :smt002 ...