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Also, maybe describe the ballroom/assembly hall. It'd be nice to get a visual on that and understand the setting more. Just a brief but clear description would be fine.

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THE STUFF WITH HER PARENTS AND ALENA. Maybe make her have more of a reaction when she sees the picture. After all, it is the ...

BILLIE. NO. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? I KNOW ARTEMIS IS A JERK BUT YOU DONT DO THAT! NO! BILLIE! AAAH! WBNNOVNNAODNVKDKVNOHVNVOAHVVOHA9QEOGGQ9GOA THAT WAS SO STUPID!

SHE DID IT AGAIN!!!! WOOOOOOHHOOOO!!! SO FREAKING COOL!!!!! by the way, really creative chapter with all the races' magic and strengths and stuff :D I really liked finding out more ...

I will be sure to do that, if the glitch is fixed. I'll probably leave fangirling comments on some along the way. Oh my gosh, I hope we're on the ...

Wow. I went through the exact same thing like a year ago. You pretty much explained my life. You need to understand that everyone will, has, or is going through ...

SHE DID IT!!!!!!!!! XD YAAAAYY!!!!! GO BILLIE!!! YOU RULE!!!!!! YOU DIIIDD IIIIIITT!!!!

You have no clue how much I have to turn laughter into a cough because I laugh so loud and weird sometimes. XD It's so awkward.

That would've been a really good title XD I chose taking life because the things they men and women would be doing could suck the emotional life out of them ...

Aww, thanks! You really don't have to. It's an incredible pleasure reading your novel!

You totally understood correctly. It was purposefully vague and mysterious, but I see where you would get confused. I was thinking drugs for the part about men, but anything you ...

Thank you! I really appreciate it!

Thank you so much! It means so much to me :D

Thanks! It was meant to be intense :)