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That's totally alright. Rhythm is something I need to work on. Thanks!

that would also suck. hopefully Rick and them have the courtesy to clean the church. after all it is their mess. I wanted to injure her badly after Maggie said ...

i didnt even remember the promise at first XD. I felt horrible for sasha. They were such an amazing couple! I felt horrible for gabriel when he said, "But... this ...

that part was so creepy! It was sad and awesome and intense and asodnvownvohfhbboaenfboihhnrherbonaefoibhronbaod AAAAH i felt the feels

Oh my word... BOB WAS BIT. YOU WERE RIGHT. JUST NOT ON THE LEG. ON THE SHOULDER. OH MY GOSH WHATS GONNA HAPPEN I am so sorry, I truly thought ...

I only read a couple paragraphs, and I don't have time to read more, but since I haven't yet read the previous chapters, I think I'm going to start from ...

Yea i think i know what you mean. When they were in the sewage? Yeah i did too, but their automatic celebration Sasha killed it was a sign Bob was ...

Thanks for the tips. It's interesting to see people's different views and opinions on my work. I will consider your comments and tips on flowiness and rhythm for this poem ...

Yea. I'm gonna make a revised version of this poem with the suggestions in previous reviews that probably wont rhyme. We'll see what happens. Thanks for your support. You should ...

Awww! Thank you so very much! I'm very glad you could relate to this, and I'm so extremely honored that you love it so much. It means so much to ...

I see where you're coming from and what you mean. I would love for my poems to be more classical (like yours XD), but when I'm wanting it to rhyme, ...

Thanks for all the suggestions :D Some of my wording is a little strange because i wanted this poem to rhyme. If I hadn't, I probably would have used different ...

Aww. Thank you iron.n :D. means a lot to meh

thank you so much! i love minecraft, and i definitely laughed along with you XD. thank you very much for the stanza tip. i tried to put spaces, but they ...

You got it pretty right. I would say the people I wrote about are pretty different from most, but I admire them and want to be like them, and I ...