pencilgirl

Hey! How are you? Welcome to YWS! so for starters...WOW! No seriously i'm shocked! Dude this is just beautiful! I'm sorry but you have got to share some of you'r ...

Hey! How are you doing? Firstly, Happy Writing Secondly, my critics, lets see...around the poem i was confused as whats the girl actually in relation to the poet. At first ...

Hey! how's it going? :) Alright, the first error is this: "He stood tall, board shoulders squared and chin lifted definitely." It should be; "He stood tall, 'broad' shoulders squared ...

rabbits taking over..... how do i put this THATS NEVER GOING TO HAPPEN! well i guess its an 18 year olds imagination. i mean jonathan swift must have been 37 ...

hello i am pencil and here to write a review! well i have to say you are not exactly expressing well because of the topic you have chosen. the rhymes ...

amazing work. hello im pencil and also new. welcome and excellent work done you surely took me into a fantasy of various poems since your rhymes were excellent and future ...

very spontaneous. hi i'm pencil and i thought your poem was full of rhymes that were meaningful and not very random. you surely have the potential to improve and i ...

hi i am pencil! good job on your first post. your work has a theme of darkness and beauty of expression. it reminds me of the way i write on ...

hahahahhahahhahha! good job you got most of it hryming well all of was hilarious. you really love food don't you well now you got me hungry. all i can say ...

hi i'm pencil! here to review i suspect your new since you have one post or maybe not.whatever, well your work is acceptable and well elaborated. you can work on ...