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Re: Chapter One - A Tale of Two Songs
Hello, pelsteam here to review! I saw your post in Fiction Discussion, so I’m dropping by to leave a review on it. The shadows of Athesan clung to Jiaying Song, ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: The Clockwork Titan
Hello, pelsteam here to review. “Just a little further now,” Audrea said. “You’ve gotta hold on just a little bit longer. I’ll find a way to get you out of ...
Dec 29, 2020 -
Re: On the Song of Eärendil the Mariner
Hello, pelsteam here to review and to help you get this out of the Green Room! Full disclaimer: I haven’t read the Lord of the Rings in a long time ...
Dec 29, 2020 -
Re: Stranger journey to Plymouth
Hello, pelsteam here to review. Judging by the context of the Mayflower, this letter would have been written during the early 17th century. I’m not very well-versed in this historical ...
Dec 28, 2020 -
Re: stoned
Hello, pelsteam here to review. The sun peeked through my window a little earlier than I wanted, and I hit snooze about five times before I finally swung my legs ...
Dec 27, 2020 -
Re: When Your Name Is A Lie
Hi, pelsteam here with a review. Baroness ran through the woods, branches tearing at her dress, and ripping into her skin. But she kept going, even as she misplaced her ...
Dec 27, 2020 -
Re: The God Debate
Hi, pelsteam here to review. Going by your description, I’m going to assume you’re writing entirely in the style of Richard Dawkins; presenting one side of an argument without playing ...
Dec 27, 2020