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Re: Schizophrenic
okay thank you! ^.^
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Re: Schizophrenic
oh oh oh i'm back but i just wanna ask a question: can i add this to my notebook of poems? i sorta just have a notebook and i copy ...
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Re: the rooster
awwhh thank you! I'll change it asap ^w^
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: the rooster
Aww thank you! cx I'll start capitalizing and add some punctuation to the piece. THANK YOU for the tip on the formatting!
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Re: 04:25
As mentioned earlier, poems absolutely do not have to rhyme. In fact, most don't. Thank you for reading and reviewing though! ^.^
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: 04:25
And you for reading my work and reviewing! ^.^ Like queereleves said, poetry has many different forms. I didn't pay as much attention to rhyming as I usually do, instead, ...
Nov 9, 2014 - Re: 04:25 Nov 7, 2014
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Re: i held onto september
whoa dude this is just....perfect. it's an amazing short poem, i mean holy cow. the wording is great, the imagery is great. everything is great. wow. almost every line is ...
Oct 13, 2014 - Re: i held onto september Oct 13, 2014
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Re: the rooster
yayyy, my first actual follower! c; aww, thank you for all those comments! I'm actually very very pleased and somewhat surprised at the great feedback I got about this poem. ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: the rooster
aha I've been getting better at moving away from the "stereotypical rhyming." Honestly this poem was a bit of fun, and I suppose the author of the poem (well, me) ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: the rooster
awww you're so nice xx thank you! c:
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: the rooster
jesus. I'm so sorry. both of my grand parents (on my dad's side) died of cancer as well. thank you for the sweet comments though c:
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: the rooster
aww you guys are all so nice cx i never thought that this would get such great responses - i spent maybe fifteen minutes at most working on this, and ...
Oct 13, 2014
