peanutgallery007

Hiya! I'm Peanut. I love poetry, and reviewing it, so, here I be! :P nit- picks When you're at the top, With nothing to lose.. Dont let your gaurd down, ...

Over- all ; excellent rhythm, topic, and fluency. Truly a masterpiece! Nit- picks ; I think I only have two little nit- picks this time; Of the sights of abstract ...

Hiya! Nice to meet you! ~Peanut OK, lets have a few sections of criticism; Over- all It was way too short. Please consider expanding the over- all length of the ...

You asked me to tear this apart. How could I? There is so little to critique, because everyone beat me here, and this is just a wonderful story in itself! ...

OK lets get started 8) . First of all, you can ease up on the periods at the end. They aren't needed for every single ending... try connecting a few ...

First of all, I would just like to congratulate you on writing this wonderful poem. I absolutely loved it, for it was beautiful, and I loved your description and expressions ...

:D I would change a couple of things. First of all, your rhythm is very inconsistent, so it seems. The line breaks are what does it, I'm pretty sure. It ...

Erm... this sounds a whole lot like the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. That isn't bad but I would put it in FanFic instead. Oh, by the way, the form ...

OK, I like this poem, but I've heard a lot of things like it before. Not that you copied someone! Heavens, no, I wouldn't accuse you of that :) . ...

Wow. Nice poem; it's great! Yes, the old English is a little funky in there sometimes, but, other than that, it's wonderful! :P Nice work, with a very strong, true ...

Hello! Wonderful poetry, dear. I loved it. First off, I just want to say that you have a wonderful inspiration for this piece; I can really tell all that you ...

Hello Eliza! I'm here, as you wanted ;) ... *whispers*; I was going to look at this anyway, but thanks for posting ;) Melissa sat in the midst of a ...

Hello, CK Lynn! I love, love, love Pantoums and fire, so, thank you! :P First off, I just want to say congrats on making this pantoum more than three stanzas... ...

Hi! I'm Peanut, here to review! :P my perfect solid-self feels itself shatter- "Sold-self" right before "itself" sounds like you are repeating yourself. It also seems to make your rhythm ...

Hello! Yay, I'm the first to review! these walls contain me as my life comes to a close my fists are no match my scarred wrists, hold no strength I ...