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Hello! I'm here as requested. Like Amy said before me, it looks like you've got this chapter pretty well- reviewed XD I'd like to say that for some reason, the ...

tidal waves bring in all the shells unknown to me I reach after them. I'd put a semi-colon at the end of the second line. (I like the third haiku ...

Hola! Here to review ;) Nice to see you again, Lily! First off, if you ever need help writing from a male POV, you are always welcome to PM/email me ...

Hello! I'm Peanut, and I will be one of your critics on this story. First off, this story format is a personal favorite of mine; beginning with an action scene ...

Hello! I'm Peanut (it says so on my underwear!... not really.) and I'll be reviewing your story today. Also note that the character narrating the prologue and the boy in ...

Hello! I'm Peanut. I enjoy non-fiction, so I'll be reviewing your work today! =D Gray Matters Most, if not all, of society's problems can be traced back to the human ...

AHAHAHAHAHAHA. Omg. You're my new hero. XD That was freaking amazing. And you made a lot of good points there; like the whole part about how Edward warns her constantly ...

Hello Stori! I think I've seen you around before. (I must have because you've been on YWS for a while!) So anyway, with the way this is formatted, it almost ...

Hola! You already know me so what's the point in an introduction? First off, I liked your idea and it was creative. Not to mention you got a better grade ...

I love it. I swear, right when the accident happened I knew her friends would die. I got tears in my eyes. The only thing I must critique on is ...

Hello, I'm Peanut. Okay, so this story kept me reading. I loved the word choice and the way you described everything vividly. I myself have never written a flash fiction ...

I'm hoping that soon someone comes along and gives you a real, nice, thorough review. I can't though. Because I have nothing to say. It had wonderful balance. To me ...

Greetings fellow classmate =P The warm, dry air; which cracks your throat, makes you realize your need for water. I doubt that's the correct place to use a semi-colon. I'd ...

Oh yes, this was the key to my past, peasant, and future. Peasant, I'm very sure, is supposed to be "present". dark maple trickled with ebony musk is whittled with ...

“you’ll find the superintendents office. Report to him.” I'm pretty sure it's "superintendent's" ;) There had to be at least a dozen doors lining the sides of the hall. And ...