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Re: Escape from the Academy, Part 2
I read the first part and cant wait for more. Im excited to find out what is going to happen to Anya. She must be pretty important for them to ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: untitled
Thank you for all your reviews! Chosenofair i would just like to point out that they are not infront of a castle they are in a castle's dungeon, i guess ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Pre-face - no name - story 2.
This was a good preface, but it was very short. I'd like to know more about the character. I also think that if you rearrange the last sentence and put ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: angel from ashes
hey, thanks for reviewing!and swaysway i'd just like to point out that the living room didn't fall in the kitchen did. I should have mad that clearer, and Ill fix ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: angels from ashes
Hey guys thank you for the advice. The reason it seemed rushed was because it was a school project and we only had eight pages to write it. Also it ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Blithe Bereavement - Prologue
hi i thought you did a great job! you have a great sense of humor. i loved the way Death felted like he would be so involved with Ebony's death ...
Oct 17, 2008