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“The radio…the river was in sight.” There needs to be a comma after “on”. ”I drew a breath, the crystal linings laying on the ripples of water were awe inspiring.” ...

Suzanne!

Okay, Rachael? Can I just say I loved this? Because I did. The style was so fresh, talking from a perspective that knew what had happened, but they were talking ...

Hi(: I'm Sarah. First off, you say that this is based on a movie. Unlike the other reviewers I don't think this should be in fan-fic because one, there is ...

Hi, Pirate(: I'm Sarah. First off, I love the title. It's what made me click on the link. My staccatos, slurs, and crescendos took me away to a faraway land ...

Hi, Demoness(: I'm Sarah and I just want to start off by saying I love this song by Flyleaf. Here goes: Maybe I would’ve managed today too if it weren’t ...

Splodey, doll, I'm gonna try to do this. No grantee that this will help. But here goes. I’ve been to worse places than this, I think, As I wake up ...

Splodey, you finally wrote! I knew you could do it. I don't really have that much to say about this piece. I've told you before that I love your voice, ...

Emily! (: I don't really have much to say about this chapter. In the other reviews I went through grammar stuff and things about the characterization (or the lack there ...

Emily! Hi(: First off to make it to where it's not all scrunched up go to edit. Then there should be a thing at the bottom that says options already ...

Matt! Here as requested. First off I like the idea of this. The way I saw it the dolls were representing Jodie's family and I really liked that. But as ...

Hi, Jas! Peanut here for a review. Pain was hidden shallowly in the palms of his hands This is an interesting way to start out. I like it but it ...

This story is 12 years old? Really? Wow...I'm impressed. I'm sure it's gone through a lot of revision but it's still really good. The only thing I didn't like was ...

Okay, first off: I love the last stanza! It's amazing and I think it's the best one out of all of them. I understood most of it and caught a ...

Hey, Micki! I'm here for a review(: Anything to help my poweranger team mate. Nitpicks: Yet I didn't mind Comma after yet. This cold hunk of metal was the only ...