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passionatelyme

  • Other » Realistic, Humor Re: Eternally Punished

    I think you'll get some negative feedback simply because of the content, but I like this poem, and I hope that others like it, too. I love the simplicity and ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Bang

    This is absolutely stunning. I love onomatopoeia, especially in poetry. It creates such vivid imagery that really makes you feel the character. You used so many strong words, and it ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Is Religion Evil?

    This. is flawless. I wish everyone could read this and understand. It's so sad that people don't actually read the bible for themselves, but they hear "the bible says this", ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Too Many of Us

    THIS. THIS IS THE REASON I AM A PART OF THIS COMMUNIUTY. GEMS LIKE THIS. But in all seriousness that was genuinely beautiful, and something that so many people can ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: How Jane died.

    Wow. This is stunning. Your use of imagery is beautiful, and I loved the content. The abrupt ending was clearly a metaphor of her death, and I loved the subtlety ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: Shattered Reflection

    This is so well written. You drew me in immediately, and the plot was twisting. Great job.

    Sep 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance

    OMG. I absolutely love this poem. THe adjectives you used are so precise, and being a dancer myself, I can totally relate. Nice job.

    Sep 11, 2012


To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better.
— Jim Rohn