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It's your poem, you can do what you want! But there's a balance between stating the truth, and shaping the truth into something that appeals to your readers. Just as ...

I planned to put most of the emphasis on /best-selling/, haha. :P and as a [obvious] fan of romance novels, I'd be more than willing to read your story if ...

I'm not that good, haha. thanks for the compliment, but you don't want to write like me. your style is unique. besides, trust me: if you continue writing at this ...

Ahh, thank you! I think my main qualm about 'showing' instead of telling is that the general purpose of the letter is the narrator writing to Chris, who is already ...

Thank you so so much! I often tend to get wordy (something I'm trying to improve!), so thanks for pointing that out. Something that might get a bit confusing is ...

thanks so much!

gracias!

c:

Just wanted to let you know that ch. 4's up. Take your time, ofc!

Totally don't worry about it. Take as much time as you need. Thanks for reading.

3's also up! Ofc, take your time and read at your own convenience.

2's republished, and with a few edits. Hopefully it doesn't disappoint!

Hey Renee, thanks for your review! Your point about "I thought I was dreaming" is a good one; I'll have to play with the phrasing a bit. My thought was ...

Hey J, thanks for the review. This could definitely use some reshaping, and I'm glad you pointed out the things you did. You suggested that I should really take advantage ...