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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 4 – Faustian Pact

    Nop, Stephen has nothing to do with the beginning of the existence of Oracles. He's trying to find a cure because his daughter is one. The "Stephen" pieces are very ...

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Unraveling of Maggie Rose (Part One)

    You're welcome. If you need other French tips, just send me a message. I wouldn't be doing my duty to my country if I let our language be butchered :p

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Unraveling of Maggie Rose (Part One)

    Hi, it's not a review at all. It's just a little remark, hopefully helpful. Okay, over here, names have a gender, they're either feminine or masculine (sorry, that doesn't really ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: once upon a time in havana part 1

    I'm confused. I was dropping by to leave a review, but nothing. I don't know how to comment on nothingness, although I suppose that would be interesting. Plus, what's with ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Poem #2

    Shouldn't there be a seasonal reference too to make it an haiku?

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 3 – The Never-Ending Pity Party

    Enjoy the walk, then. Until next time.

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tale of Ye'Dunn: A TBB Tale

    Probably not what they have in mind when they say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery ;)

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 3 – The Never-Ending Pity Party

    Oh, thank God it's a real review. I've been getting notifications from a couple of trolls for two days straight -_- I've never been happier to read some criticism. I ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 2 - My Programed Death

    I hate info-dumping. My eyes glaze over. It's nice that authors spend time world-building, but please, we're looking for good novels, not for an alternative world's textbook. It's a little ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 2 - My Programed Death

    Thanks for the review. Don't worry, I still count this as a positive review. My real problem is actually the exact opposite. I know exactly where I'm going and I've ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 37

    Okay, good. If you ever need something translated to French, I'm your woman ;)

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 37

    I mean that! It's like there's an entirely different country with an entirely different language that only exists in American stereotypes!

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 37

    Oh, careful with that. I've got a contest with a friend to find the worst French translations in American book. You guys are genius...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 6 - Oracles Anonymous

    Now, that's real suspense...

    Jun 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 6 - Oracles Anonymous

    Thank you for the review. I know the story starts out really slow. I just really like my characters and the world around them and I guess I wanted to ...

    Jun 3, 2018


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