papillote

No, I wrote it in english. It was fun, but maybe it was a mistake. My english isn't good enough to do justice to the story, and I've got about ...

Thank you for the review, Mailice. It's always a nice little surprise to come home from work and read one. Your advice's especially helpful since english isn't my first language ...

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm publishing the next chapter very soon. I hope you'll review it too. I know that world's language is a little bit of a challenge, but ...

Thank you very much for the review. I hope you get a chance to read the rest and see if you like it too. Yes, you're not the first person ...

Thank you for the review, I'll keep the advise in mind when I do rewrites. 'Hmmm...you use the word garden, then you use the word gree.' I'm sorry, I don't ...

Thanks so much for the review. It was helpful as always. :D I've already made some corrections. The sentence about how everyone was dressed was just clunky, I think. I ...

I've been thinking about this. I'm not sure how I'd use split personality in a story. Criminology isn't my strong suit but, from what I understand, there is still a ...

Glad you liked it. :D I look forward to that

Thanks for the comment and thank you very much for taking the time to go back to the beginning. I'm always glad for a review, but it's a little annoying ...

Hi, thanks for catching this, it was a mistake in editing. I'm glad you like my story, hope the next chapters can retain your attention too. Don't worry, plenty of ...

Thanks for the advice, I'll think about it. I loved going over the lady's outfits - really enjoyed imagining beautiful, impractical gowns. :)

Thanks for another helpful review :) I appreciate this, and I'll keep that in mind as I write the next few chapters. Hope you enjoy the rest.

Thank you for the review. I know I tend to write in short sentences even in descriptions. That's something I need to work on. And yes, I know the lady ...

Thanks for the review and the enthusiasm, as always. Don't worry, I'll keep writing and publishing...

And I'm going to wait with breathless anticipation :p Reviews drive people crazy ;)