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I like the fire in your writing. I feel like I can hear your voice yelling at people to get motivated. However I have no clue what Nigerians have been ...

I think I may have the wrong meaning out of the poem...but I'm sticking with it. The rhyme scheme was off, but I didn't notice until I read wewinwelose's review. ...

I actually loved "Fledgling". It's simple and sweet. As TedusCloud says, it's a metaphor not overly used. I think you should put a little more imagery in it and maybe ...

Okay, it is a sweet poem and the best are the spur-of-the-moment poems. There are few things that could make it better. The first line: She makes a rainbow look ...

You make the reader feel and you give them a good impression. It is very good. I can't find anything really to critique. The only thing is that when you ...

Well this is a very interesting twist on the garden of eden story. I find this very interesting. Is there a reason why Cain is in his name? Will he ...

So I love reading poetry but not really up for reviewing. To me, judging the grammar is hard because some poets don't like grammar. I think yours is fine. No ...

I like the flow of this. A thing I caught was that "feel hin in side me" should be "feel him inside me". You should either keep it all in ...

It catches my attention and the beginning is good. I understand that it is meant be vague (and I don't mind that) BUT it is too vague. You switch from ...

How interesting! A few lines were hard to understand but all in all very interesting. The end makes me giggle evilly. The change in rhyme pattern threw me off. I ...

This is very interesting and moves you reader. The only problems with it is that it needs punctuation and capitals. Other than that it is very good. The beginning is ...

Well I think we all feel this and I am glad you wrote this because this is something I feel right now. I think you need to put different stanzas ...

I hate that you put that note at the beginning because, although it doesn't make any sense, I actually liked reading it and pulled something really deep out of it. ...

okay it grabbed my attention. there were some odd places though and i find it odd that the main character would sympathize with Nico so quickly. That was a little ...