paintingtherain97

Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on it. Sorry if the rhymes were sort of forced. I'm new at this.

Thanks so much. I've been revising and revising this but a lot of people try to be too nice when they review and it doesn't help. Thanks for the honesty ...

This is interesting and really good, but you should probably try to condense it a little and maybe split it into seperate stanzas so the reader isn't overwhelmed. Other than ...

I like this. It's nice and short but the message is definitely clear, that country music sucks. I couldn't agree more. The rhyming is good, too. Good work. Keep it ...

The grammar thing is basically just how in some sentences, you capitalized words that weren't at the beginning. It might have been intentional and it's poetry, so grammar isn't a ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone. I'll work on the poem some more.

This is pretty good. The rhyme scheme was a little off-beat, and you should maybe double-check for grammar stuff but I liked the poem. Is it about that guy who ...

Ha! I liked this. It's catchy and funny. I didn't see any bad grammar or anything either. Not bad.

Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on it. And I like Journey. I've never really watched Glee, but a lot of my friends do.

Thanks.I already sent it into the contest, though. I'll remember that for my next story though. Feedback is appreciated.

I liked this. It's pretty difficult to make a construction report exciting, but the way you added interesting facts here and there made it good. There were a few fragments ...

Other than slight grammatical errors, this is great. It preaches feminism in the workplace, instead of the ordinary objectification of women. I love it.

I thought that it was a bit cliche, an old caught-in-your-own-world love story, but the rhyme scheme and overall format is good. Aside from the subject matter, I thought it ...

I think it's a bit simple, but the words are choppy and neat. The message is easy to understand and relate to and, overall, this is a good poem. It ...