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It's not bad. I liked the way you were able to describe depression and the way it feels like it will never get better. I did see a lot of ...

I like this a lot. The off-and-on rhyming appeals to me. Also, I love the line about the march of the poet. I can really relate to it, like most ...

This is absolutely amazing! I love it. The rhyme scheme is great, the meaning is good and relatable, and the ending is solid. I'm not sure that I have anything ...

This is a good article, but I think that if you worked on it, it could definitely improve and become an even better article. I think the main difficulty you're ...

I like the idea. The "don't judge a book by it's cover" theme is relatable and useful in a story. However, I noticed a lot of run-on sentences, and all ...

Structurally, the rhyme scheme and grammar were pretty much perfect. The subject matter was a little... gruesome, but some poetry is somewhat scary to read. It reminds me a bit ...

I love this. Unlike some of the poems of romance I've read, it isn't pretentious and cliche. This is real and somewhat of a riddle until you read it through ...

I loved it! It was so raw and real and full of feeling, way better than anything I've ever written. I noticed some errors in grammar, just little typos. For ...

I thought this was a pretty good poem. I liked the imagery, but when describing things like the sunset, it would be more interesting if you used words like "crimson" ...

I thought this was interesting. Things I liked: the use of imagery, the emotion, and the spirituality. I liked the imagery because it was vivid. You could kind of see ...

This is really good. I liked the way each layer of the onion represented different shames. It's clever. Also, the ending was good, I thought. Other people might not like ...

This is probably one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on here so far. Not only could I not find errors in grammar, but the imagery you used ...

I liked this. It's pretty difficult to make a construction report exciting, but the way you added interesting facts here and there made it good. There were a few fragments ...

This is kind of a rhymey cutesy poem. I'm not great with poetry, but I think it depends on what you were going for as to how good the poem ...

Grammatically, there were only slight comma and hyphenation problems that you could probably find if you looked hard enough and then fix them. As for the important stuff, this story ...