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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Chapter One

    Woooow! First off i'm so glad to hear you are going to follow this story. I love having new readers but even more so I love the fact that you ...

    Dec 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Prologue

    Thanks!!

    Dec 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Chapter Two

    Awh thankyou! I'm glad to see somebody read it! Yes Brody is a different character of his own. I agree with what you said about the royalty stuff! I hope ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Prologue

    Hello! I am really glad to hear you are thinking about following this story. Like I try to address everybody who starts reading it, I can promise you it is ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Prologue

    WOW!! What an awesome and WELL NEEDED review. It really means a lot that you took so much time to help with this chapter. I went back and changed everything ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Sacrifice - Prologue

    Thanks so much for taking the time to read & comment! This chapter does sound cliche and like any other teenage novel, I will admit, but really it is not. ...

    Dec 23, 2012


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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