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Re: Love
I actually like your ryhming scheme here, though it does seem a bit experimental. Think about it, orange ryhmes with no other one word. It kind of sounds like hinge, ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: The truth about teachers
Yay! This reminds me of a classic script. The people you really think are crazy are really the ones who are right. Reminds me of great works, like "A Wrinkle ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Get Over It
I'd have to agree with most everyone here. It's a little bit too short to give a good critique, but if you keep working on it, there will be a ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: My Truth
Well, I'm late in commenting, but I relate to this play so much, so I have to comment somehow. You basically touched every feeling we bipolar and hormonal teens face ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Numb - Opinions please
Honestly, the way you described the situation is amazing. It's unbelievably passionate with sadness and I can even feel the strong sense of anger and frustration with in the words. ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: True Love?
I'd have to agree with the first two. I do believe that there were some weak points in the poem where it was cliche, but what I've learned is that ...
Jun 17, 2009
