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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: So...

    Ugh! So sad! And I truly relate to this having been in the same situation a while back. So, feelings out for the author if you actually went through this. ...

    Nov 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl in the Moon

    Rub68- Hey! Great piece, it had excellent diction and a nice flow to it. That last line, "shining with borrowed brightness" is really well put. I do agree with the ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: t5

    Hey, Yastika. Great prologue, it had a lot of wit and bite to it. Very "Maximum Ride" feeling. "More like a scientific experiment that went wrong. I was literally born ...

    Oct 5, 2014


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