oregongirl

good poem. I really enjoy these. I am looking forward to another one if there is going to be one. Great job! :D

This was good. I liked it. I do think it was a little quick though. It was really good and I enjoyed it a lot. :D

Awesome! This was intense and almost real! I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great description and words and a great point that you are making about good and evil. Keep ...

I agree it was a little too quick. Maybe you should have it go a little longer before having it pull you in.

I think that "wnd" was supposed to be wind. Make sure you profread your pieces. I like it very much!

hmm. interesting are you starting a story with it? I like the beginning though.

I liked your poem a lot. You described the things very well! I got what you were trying to say very well